last warrior of valor(the begining)

[the murder]

:serious:....okay, so ive been listening to alot of amon amarth and playing alot of final fantasy 7.....so my mind is in...i guess like, viking mode
this is part 1

Going on through lands of fire
Raging through the burning fields
I must kill the king
Stopping for nothing
The screams of my brothers
Calling from the pyres

Our lands once reigned with peace
Where the rivers ran clear
Everything shined like gold
Then from the west
The tyrant known as Sorgen
Brought his dark forces
Within the millions
Brought hell to us all
Now the waters run red
All that is heard is the dirge of our home

Among the hills ahead
I see their hordes
With flags flown high
Shows the insignia of the king
My heart beats with anger
Gone is my fear
Kill the bastard king

I, the last warrior of valor
Bring unto them vengeance
I chant the ancient runes
And onto them rains down lightning from the gods
They sound the horns of war
And I welcome the battle
For I shall obliterate them all
Charging onward
My blade stabbing their hearts

The blood of the scum drains itself from the wounds
Their blood so sweet smelling, just as roses
Today, here in the firelands
I let my challenge be known
I will kill the bastard king

At night I can not sleep
The nightmares depict that fateful day
Over and over the screams crawl their way into my thoughts
Cold night sweats
My tears flow
The dawn has come, no time to cry
Their memory in my heart
That is all I have
But it is all I need for the strength to carry on

[shadowmaks]

wow, it sounds great, like something you'd see in a movie or one of those very thick fantasy books.

[WolvesRose]

That was great! The emotion and feeling in it almost makes me want to go and kill the 'bastard king' myslef. I hope you continue it.