...father...

[carolyn07]

...okei!,.

its my first ever poem and i just decide to share this to you coz

im such a fan of literature but cant really make my own poem,.and nows the time!,.

my professore in literature asked us to make a poem and guess what i got perfect score!,.so proud of myself!,.

sooooo,.heres my poem!,.

Father

Of all the men you ever have
who among them,youll ever love to have?
is it the man you give your love?
or is it to your father who give you love?

i dedicate this poem to my father
to whom i consider the best man ever
he's the best father for us
is there anyone like him?i want to ask

he's very noble and teaches us good manners
"love for your fellow is all that matters"
be a good citizen and love others
he says, so we can gain respect from others

i love my father so much
hes the number one man, i treasure so much
always want to be with him everytime
he always have my respect in forevers time.

...so what can you say guys?,.is it the start of my literary carreer?,.joke?,.
or still not good enough!,.♥

[BlueSano]

nice carol.. i enjoyed it .. it has a nice feeling to it :D... i wish i still thought of my father that way... i think it's awsome you wrote a poem about your dad ^^ keep it up :D

[carolyn07]

...err!,.thanks!,.blue!,.♥

[Abarai]

i found it quite good :)

waiting for the next one!

[BuBBl3s]

lol this is gud..i wish i could say the sme tho ...T.T
anyway
keep up the work ^^

[Wonnetz]

this is good keep up the good work maybe some day u could b a singer or somting

[Axe Man]

Awesome Car really good

[-y-o-s-h-]

.....nice one.....
i felt that u really love ur father so much!..... ;)

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