envy

[atomsk]

okie here we go

envy
take from me my desire
give to me that which i desire
then maybee i wont desire
so thus vanquished is my desire
nay tis this envy that leads this desire
tis the envy that hounts my soul and racks my brain
take it all away
take from me my envy
take from me my desire

without them i am
yet i yearn still for this desire
what might that desire be so strong
as to take from me my senses
and give back to me my envy
tis not human desire
but a scourge, a devil this desire
its roots be that of sin

what be thy name sin

and so it replies "envy"

what be this envy of

and so it replies "lust"

so twas nought this envy driving me mad but lust

and so it replies "nay, this be envy"

but this desire is fueled by envy which is of lust
just tell me my sin, where might thee loyalties lie

and so it does not reply

was it all just a pointless squable
what is it that drives thee in the depest sense

and so it does not reply

AHA!
i see now
but this secret has driven me mad
i cannot bear the burden on my mind
envy i know thy nature
thus i know thy origin

hrmm thats a little long ill make a part two soon.
so im confused i did this on impulse is it a poem or a story

[wi_sam]

i so envy you right now ...

[atomsk]

i so envy you right now ...
it sux tho -.-
\does tortured artist routine\

[~nekochan~]

it sux tho -.-
\does tortured artist routine\

not bad not bad ^^