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the murder
12-31-2008, 08:03 PM
a maniac who hates everything with the means to kill, so he does.....comment please::D:

Leave behind the rubble take on the new day
Before me is the next city
Ill burn it down to the ground
they’ll run from my fury
With hatred and aggression I rack up the corpses
Their stench so deep in my nose
I eternally smell the pungent rot

Run rats run
I enjoy the chase
The killing gets that much better
My eyes are fixed on my victims
Ill drain you of life, another to slaughter

To devastation
To the wreckage of man
Lets all say cheers for the end of days

Kill you, destroy
If there be a pillar of life
I shall tear it down
Yes there is reason to fear
Scream for your life, it adds to my fun
Please cry, I love to see your tears

One by one, I go on
I need not justify, why
Be another underfoot to my seethe
I shan’t not rest until I end all who breathe

Vakarak
12-31-2008, 08:19 PM
well i like your other poem much more but still.... this is a very colourful composition not really friendly with the mouth cause of the rhyming scheme but i still like works like these.

cutieB
12-31-2008, 08:23 PM
That was so live i like it yu should write more.::D: