unfinished piece

[BuBBl3s]

umm this is an unfinished piece but i want ur guys thought about it..



i feel the rain on my face
while i walk alone
down the long road
not a soul
the only thing
is the sound of own breath
and the rain drops hitting the ground
shall i keep walking
or just lay down and die

[the murder]

im intersted...but too short, but so far its good...finish it

[BuBBl3s]

im intersted...but too short, but so far its good...finish it

yeha it is too short .>.>(unfinished)
lol
anyway thnx