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I'm a Bitch
12-22-2008, 08:10 PM
The Outcome:

I was crouched on a thick limb of a tree in the thick forest. He wanted me, but I didn’t know why. No matter what that reason is, he wouldn’t get me.

The forest quickly heated up. He was here, I just knew it… and he knew where I was. Little did he know, I was ready for him.

do you like it? would you like to know how this started? vote now!!!::D:

Nightmare
12-22-2008, 08:19 PM
I really liked that. More would be appreciated.

I'm a Bitch
12-22-2008, 08:29 PM
thank you. i'm typing the 1st part of the first chapter now

ylaixVK
12-22-2008, 09:10 PM
It's good(=

my preface is so much longer compared to yours

I'm a Bitch
12-22-2008, 09:11 PM
i try not to give too much away. lol

ylaixVK
12-22-2008, 09:12 PM
i try not to give too much away. lol

haha, mine is a light weight summary but i leave out the very right outcome

I'm a Bitch
12-22-2008, 09:17 PM
i'm typing chapter one part one. it'll be up tomorro

animex09
12-22-2008, 09:20 PM
It's good but I want to see more!

Nightmare
12-22-2008, 09:21 PM
I will enjoy reading it...
Subliminal message coming up read my story It is called zodiac.

cutieB
12-22-2008, 10:30 PM
yh we want more lets go gogogogo.

I'm a Bitch
12-22-2008, 11:13 PM
almost done... chapter one coming up!!!

ylaixVK
12-23-2008, 01:03 AM
Ooh, can't wait to see it(=

Russkie
12-23-2008, 01:07 AM
Stabbing my eyes with a ball point pen feels less painful than reading those sentences.

I'm a Bitch
12-23-2008, 01:24 AM
Stabbing my eyes with a ball point pen feels less painful than reading those sentences.

is that good or bad?

atomsk
12-23-2008, 03:41 AM
is that good or bad?
it means its ok comming from russkie

D-Thief
12-23-2008, 05:00 AM
Madding short! :dead:
:pissed: Must have more!! :pissed:

I'm a Bitch
12-23-2008, 03:35 PM
it means its ok comming from russkie

lol... thanks. i'll post chapter 1 part 1 tomorrow:dancing:

sleeper101
12-23-2008, 03:54 PM
its awsome i would like more and a copy of your book when you finish.

I'm a Bitch
12-23-2008, 04:17 PM
a copy? wow... really?

sleeper101
12-23-2008, 04:21 PM
If its at all possible yes a copy

LoKiWorlD
12-23-2008, 05:51 PM
Keep it coming, Trish....I hope it's full of suspense.

I'm a Bitch
12-23-2008, 05:55 PM
glad you all liked it. i have posted "Chapter One: Part One" [that is the tread title as well] check it out!!!