End of life as I know it?

[Jason X]

The sky is falling the sky is falling
mommy watch the stars go
Marching one by one to and fro
dropping like flys the death of the skies
Watch as the moon cries.

Its short but I poured my heart into it.
Tell me what you think.

[Orangeii]

its good! (emo..) :D

[Jason X]

At least its good =]

[I'm a Bitch]

thats deep

[Jason X]

Thank you alot =T

[Nightmare]

Nice
I liked that.

[cutieB]

it was really good i like it. yu shuld do more.

[Jason X]

I write very wel when im depressed I guess ahaha well I can post more work as it comes to me thank you for your compliments guys

[fejknick]

I liked it.