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Viduus
12-20-2008, 07:37 AM
So today I woke up from a nap and had something scratching at my brain, wanting to be written. I resisted at first, then gave in. Here's what I imagine would be a chapter of something longer which I may or may not decide to write later. I'm not really looking for edits, I can do that myself, this is more or less just to see if people actually enjoy it or not. Enjoy (oh, and as a general note, I may or may not have been reading entirely too much Terry Pratchett books lately >.>).



It was a Dark and Stormy night, but the town of Due Process never really knew anything other than Dark and Stormy nights. Most scientists agreed that the dark and stormy night effect (which was widely called The Lytton Effect by the scientists; the locals just referred to it as The Way Things Are, because well… that’s the way things were) had something to do with the converging polarity fields around the city. They could not, however, explain why it was perpetually a dark and stormy night, even when the sun was clearly up above. Most scientists usually just shrugged and mumbled something about magic when they were asked about it, which was the standard scientific explanation when they had no clue about something. The local commoners (otherwise known as everyone else not of the scientific community) gave up trying to get straight answers scientist; they were not sociable figures anyways, you could hardly take one to a bar with him getting sidetracked about the contents and fermentation process of beers. Such ventures to mix locals and scientists together usually ended with the scientist getting a rather rude bonking, then waking up in some ditch with most of his pens and usually one shoe gone (the other left on when the thief realizes that it’s a scientist and his shoes are rather out of style and would not sell well, no one is quite sure where the single stolen shoes go however). Thus, scientists generally stayed in their buildings on one side of town, pushing buttons and running mice through mazes (though lab mice were in short supply at the moment as the Lab Mice 408 union was protesting the inhumane working conditions and the lack of a decent pension plan), while the locals stayed on the other side, generally working some day labor, though quite a few took to the night shift which mainly consisted of pushing sharp pointy things into other commoners, grabbing their coin purse, and fleeing into the night.

On this particular Dark and Stormy night, which most historians would agree was a Tuesday, the scientists who will be (or has-been as most time travelers said) the greatest scientist known to the world was sitting at his lab table, mixing substance A with substance B, and hoping that it would not explode. Most scientific experiments boiled down to the same general concept, mixing one thing with another and hoping it wouldn’t explode, then mixing it with another substance and hoping that it would not explode, then mixing it with yet something else and hoping it would not explode, and so on and so forth. Over the centuries, scientist had built up a resistance to explosions, to the point where it could be said that the only thing that can survive a nuclear explosion are cockroaches and scientist, but since no one knew what a nuclear explosions were, no one said it. Either way there were much worse thing in the world than nuclear explosions (if they existed, but they didn’t, though the flatulence of the giant sky bulls had the same general effects), and those usually involved stuff like getting your bones pulled out of your body while you still lived, and not even the most explosion resistant scientist could survive that. And so, the greatest scientist will-be sat and his table, waiting how substance A and substance B would react, acutely aware that his explosion resistance was not all that great. He sighed, and glanced out his window, gazing longingly at the commoner section and wondered what wonderfully amazing things they were doing out there.

At the same exact moment, the greatest hero who will have ever lived (but never existed, as most historians agreed, and confirmed by the time travelers who could never find him at the place and time he was supposed to have been) was sitting at a table, recounting his latest adventure to an ever growing crowd of people at the Salty Fish Tavern.

“The thing about giants,” he started, and stopped abruptly as he glanced down at his mug, and realized it was empty. He waved it at the bartender, who filled another mug and brought it over to his table. He grabbed his bag, and rummaged around in it for a bit, and fished out a gold piece which he flicked to the bartender, completely unaware as the crowd around him watched as the coin flew through the air in a perfect arc, landing in the bartender’s hand. This was about the tenth time the hero had gone through the same motions, and while no one in the crowd could see the gold in the bag, they sure heard it.

“…” he started again, and realized he was lost.
“Where was I?” he looked up at the crowd for assistance.
The crowd looked at one another, and to their relief someone piped up, having actually heard the last thing the hero had said.
“Giants.” That particular person said.
“Oh yesss,” the hero said, slightly dragging his speech, “The thing about giants, ish, wehell… they’s reeeeeeally tall.”

And the hero raised his hand above his head, as if to signify that anyone a few feet taller than himself would be giant. The crowd nodded, feigning interest. The hero was quite oblivious that most of the crowd had no interest in his story, and instead were watching him and his bag with the same look in their eyes as wolves when they smell a freshly cooked ham. In fact, over the last hour or so, many allegiances and deals were negotiated, then broken, then renegotiated over who would get the spoils of this small man who was getting increasingly drunk, and telling highly imaginative stories.

“But not only tall” the hero continued, stopped to let out a small burp for which he looked rather apologetic, and quickly continued with his story.
“But alsho… gigantic.” The hero nodded mostly to himself, proud of explaining things so thoroughly.

He remembered something, and quickly bent down to grab his bag again, right around the same time that a dagger flew through the same space his head had just occupied, instead thunking into the chest of one of the other crowd members, who fell over only slightly surprised (in his line of work, getting struck by a stray dagger in the chest was rather commonplace and was often was used as a rite of passage). The amateur who had thrown the dagger was quickly disposed of by some of the other crowd members. One of the few unwritten rules of their profession specifically stated that killings in taverns were prohibited. It was bad for business, both for the tavern and the ones that did the killings; no tavern wanted to be known for deaths (except maybe the Gothic Surprise, but most normal people wouldn’t even dare venture near there, in a city where it was a perpetually Dark and Stormy night, the area around the Gothic Surprise was especially Dark and Stormy), and if a tavern was known for deaths most people would not stop there, reducing the targets that could be surveyed and picked out. Some, however, couldn’t contain themselves, but they never lasted in the business for that long.

The hero had rummaged around inside the bag for a bit, and pulled out something that resembled a giant stalagmite, only it was black and a little curly. The more observant of the crowd noticed that something of this size could hardly have fit in the bag by itself, not to mention the amount of coins that had been heard clinking around inside.

“What’s that?” someone asked.
The hero grinned in a way that only very inebriated people could.
“This… ish the nhose hair of a giant."
The crowd stared and the big black thing on the table.
“The nose hair…” someone from the crowd started,
“Of a ghiant, yesh.” The hero finished. He was rather pleased with himself.
The crowd stared some more.
“You may wondah,” the hero continued after a minute, even though the crowd didn’t wonder at all, “How I gotsh my hands on this noshe hair.”
The hero looked around.
“Well, you shee, the othah thing about giantsh, othah than being tall, and… gigantic…”
The hero’s eyes crossed slightly for a second, then he glanced at his mug, and took another swig of his beer.
“Shlow. Giantsh ah… slow. Take a loooooong thime to take a single shtep, yassee. Yhu can easily climb upa ghiant, and shnip a nhose hair from his nhose. Yhu just bettah be a far whay away when it eventually shneezesh!”

The hero chuckled, mostly to his own mug of beer which he had started raising to his face to take another swig at, and then instead decided to slump down over the table. The crowd watched intently as to what was going to happen next. A few seconds later, the hero began to snore.

This, of course, provided a great deal of problems for the crowd. The truce of the tavern was still in place, but there were now new deals being brokered about what to do with someone passed out inside a tavern. In the frenzy of activity, the figure snuggled comfortably in the corner of the tavern went completely unnoticed. That, however, would not last the night.

sUnakO..
12-20-2008, 07:45 AM
woah!.its too long!.yah completely different!.*wOw..nice!.
did you summarized it?.lol

fejknick
12-20-2008, 07:52 AM
10/10. Haha great stuff.

suune
12-20-2008, 09:38 AM
Great! Keep up!

Viduus
12-24-2008, 03:34 AM
Well, here's the what I guess is chapter 2, though it's a little incomplete, and a little more serious :P



The scientist, in their egotistical wisdom, had decided a long time ago that there were certain Laws of the Universe. One such law stated that every action shall have an equal and opposite reaction. This meant that if one were being chased by, say, a pack of wild jumping sloths and were to run straight into a tree, it could also be said that the tree ran into you. This, of course, upset the trees greatly. They make every effort the possibly can to get out of the way of those fleeing, but pulling up ones roots takes quite a lot of time and careful planning. The trees also always apologize to those run in into them for not being able to get out of the way faster, but so far this apology has been mistaken for gentle swayings in the breeze by most people (except for a few hermits, but everyone knows they’re crazy).

Nevertheless, what scientist and their laws couldn’t account for was the reactions by people. For example, when person A runs into person B in a tavern fight, according to the Laws of the Universe person B actually ran into person A, and they would both quickly apologize and go and have some tea. In the case of the fight occurring in the Salty Fish Tavern however, person A ran into person B, but person B had quickly inserted something sharp and pointy into person A much to the surprise of the Laws of the Universe. And person B was in no mood to listen to the Laws of the Universe for the rest of the night.

The hero woke up, opened his eyes, and instantly regretted it. He quickly rolled over and buried his face into the crude pillow, and tried to recall the events of the night before (something that is rather difficult to do when it’s as though a herd of Sarthurian dung beetles were prancing about the insides of your head). There was something to do with beer, of course, and he may have gone a little overboard with the drinking –

New deals and arrangements had been made, the barkeep had been bribed, and everything was set to go. Someone reached for the bag, and that’s about when all hell broke loose.

– but it’s not like this was the first time he had drank a lot. The hero was slowly becoming aware that he was in a bed, which he was fairly certain he had not gotten into himself. –

The one who had reached for the bag was gone. The rest stared at the spot, and shook their heads. The were certain that bags can’t swallow people, and even more certain that whatever monstrosity just reached out and grabbed the one who had reached for the bag can’t possibly exist, and thus no one had actually reached for the bag and all was safe. The crowd advanced, and that’s when the hero started to move.

– The hero, slowly regaining minimal control of his senses, got a strange feeling that he was not alone in the room. This, of course, was disconcerting on its own. This was not the first time he had woken up in a strange bed, but the other beds had generally contained naked women, and always seems to have been a fun night, but he could just never quite remember it. –

They were within arms reach of the hero, when he snapped up in a hurry, eyes blazing. He looked at the one of the mob, took the mug still in his hand, and smashed it over his head with a force much too great for someone his size. There was a moment of confusion and apprehension among the crowd, but then anger overtook them and they attacked. There was a flurry of activity in the middle of the crowd, and one by one the crowd fell. One of the members in the outer part of the crowd decided that his was most likely not worth it any more, turned and ran, only it was straight into the figure in the corner. The figure had enough of this, and disposed of the one who ran, and moved towards the crowd.

– The hero groaned. And, for an added effect, he groaned again, just in case his first time wasn’t convincing enough.
“I see you’re finally awake.” Something spoke from the corner of the room. If sentences could scowl, this one would have been doing it spectacularly well. The hero peeked out from the corner of his eye, and saw a figure sitting in the shadows, disturbingly similar to someone he saw at the tavern the night before.
“Mrhphlhmphls.” The hero said, and realized that it’s not very easy to for coherent questions with ones face in a pillow. He turned his head sideways, making sure his eyes were as squeezed closed as possible, and tried again.
“Who are you?”
The hero could feel the indifferent shrug coming from the figure.
“Doesn’t matter. Impressive display you put on last night.”
So, the hero realized, there is a woman after all. Only this one didn’t sounds as giggly as they usually do. Didn’t sound like it even knew what a giggle was either. And come to think of it, there was some sort of… weird accent as well.
“I guess I told a really good story after all.” The hero mumbled, and ventured to open an eye. It was a lot less like a thousand needles poking at his eyeball this time, and more like a prodding by a particularly jagged spoon.
“The story was not so impressive. The part after the story, however, was a little bit better.”
The part after the story… the part after the story… what part after the story, the hero wondered. There was the beer, there was the story, and then… there is now.
“Eh?” The hero articulated carefully.
“… You do not remember?”
The hero shook his head, and the term shook is used very loosely here as he more just nudged it in one direction as he feared a full shake would lop his entire head off. The hero had reservations about seeing his own headless body.
“I see. I suppose alcohol does have strange effects on people.”
The woman stood up, and strode into the light. She was dressed in black with a signature green cloak, and the hero gasped (though in reality it sounded more like a croak as a gasp would’ve taken a lot more energy than he currently had).
“A Ranger.” He whispered.
The woman nodded, and from within her cloak produced a piece of paper with a rough but adequate sketch of the hero’s face, followed by the word WANTED, which preceded a number with a lot of zeros after it (no one really knew where WANTED pages came from, the sort of just appeared in random places where people who cared about such things milled about). The hero had seen his face on such pieces of paper before, but never for that amount. He wasn’t sure what he had done to deserve such a large number, and wasn’t sure he really wanted to find out. Still, a Ranger had come and found him, and they were not exactly the easiest to get away from. The hero groaned and wished his brain would stop trying to push itself out of his skull.

cutieB
12-24-2008, 03:39 AM
Wow its really long but its good. keep writing more.::D: